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I do have a couple of thoughts on this, mainly relating to the position of he back.
The position of her back makes it look, well, broken in relation to the way that her legs are. You can bend the spine that far, but it cannot simply bend at the middle and suddenly be straight right at the belly button whiel leading into straight legs. Next time you could consider just bringing her legs and lower back forward, to give it a more natural look rather then an awkward bend that would be vey painful and awkward to hold.
But on the plus side of things your perspective is excellent in terms of hand position. You can see clearly how the arm is bending, why she is holding it that way, ect. You also have a great deal of detail in this, which is a very good thing overall.
All in all it is a great piece of work that just had one thing that could be focused more on.
i admit that lower part of body is one of my weakness
i really should practice more and pay more attention to it
thank you very much for the critique,, i really appreciate it
desain bajunya kerenn!